by largefan
Well written, believable conversation, believable situation - absolutely the best. Can't wait for Chapter 2 and more.
I really enjoyed the lead-up & the dialogue was great. The action begs for continuance.
Nicely done ! Believable dialogue and seemingly innocent meetings leading to great sex scene.
I loved the detail and flow. Of course, who wouldn't like a couple of hot girls after you?
Long but worth it. Great Character development. I can't wait for next installment. Thanks
What a Joy to read this erotic and dangerous story! I couldn't stop. You are a wonderful writer!!
What an exciting and well written piece of erotica. I loved it!
Is the beach you are referencing panther beach ?
Great series I'm from the area and loved it!
very good story, just right degree of suspense, deception and a dawning realisation at the end.
Excellent story.
I think this is my all time favorite nudist themed story. Other than for the BJ's and the Fucking, the plot is realistic enough that it could happen. I think the psychological aspects of the characters embarrassment is beautifully handled and rings true, because of both the neighbor relationship and the age discrepancy. Also the, slow, gradual build up to seeing the girls naked was very exciting and much appreciated. Too many literotica stories fail to have any, or enough build up in my opinion.
I find that the more "real" or "believable" a story is, the more erotic it is, the only exception being those stories that are in the science fiction and fantasy genre.
It's a real page turner and truly erotic in every sense of the word.
I look forward to more excellent work from your talented mind.
Thank you so much !
Well written, did not move too quickly. Really enjoyed it and looking forward to Ch. 2.
This story is heads and tails above all of the ones in this category.