by Crescent_Flame
This was an excellent first entry. It was well-written and very erotic. I'm looking forward to more of your stories.
Great story especially for a first time. I really got into the narrator so I'd say your character development is pretty good. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep it up.
I really like they way you write, the choise of words you use,
well done
I work in IT, how come nothing like that ever happens to me!!! ;) Thank you very much for sharing this story with us!