All Comments on 'GG's, Like in Maggie Ch. 05'

You did it Talkman, you did it.

While the big titted bimbo gets the hunky husband, it is the flat chested wife that truly comes out as the worthwhile individual in the story. You obviously have Kathleen linked up with your larger story universe.

Thanks for being such a fab story teller.

Man, I can only imagine where it is all leading to. Bring it on and bring it on fast!!!!!

Keep going man

NOW LEAVE KATHLEEN ALONE!!

Please don't turn her in to one of your plastic whores.

Got pretty boring after the first 4 pages where Maggie and Andrew fuck in front of the wife. The rest was just describing the husband's new life. It droned on and wasn't very sexy or interesting except a few paragraphs. Very good story over all including all the chapters but those last 4 pages here were just a waste of time.

.....AGREED.

However that's Talkman's signature form in all his stories so don't expect to see this go away soon.

I just read the fun stuff and skip the rest. Bleh!

Once again a great story from you, different enough from your other stories to keep things fresh.

I think this chapter may have been a bit too long though. I think the story would be better served if the start of this chapter was included in chapter 4 and the rest of chapter 5 was made into an epilogue.

For the future I hope we see you delve into some different settings, than what you have done so far. Though I don't know how it would work with the universe you have built up I would like to see you go into sci-fi. I think this genre has a lot of potential for the kind of stories you write

I hope to see more form you in the future

Tracy's boss were the nun from the church & state story!

Another great story. I don't know about your other readers, but my favorite part of all your stories is right after the corruption sets in... the nasty trash talking where the husband cuts down his wifey and professes his love for the big boob vixen.

I'd love to see a "Short and Hard" set of stories from you which are much quicker and get to trash talking faster. Maybe going even harder and perverse. Have a vixen steal a married man with kids... destroy his love even for his children, maybe a pregnant wife he's "in love with", maybe the vixen physically hurts wifey and he doesn't care in the end.

The nice thing about "Short and Hard" is you get to experiment with new ideas very fast and also can practice an 'editing' muscle.

Other than that minor minor critique, I *love* your stories and am so happy to see you writing more.

Where did Andrew get the money to buy Maggie the cars, clothes, jewelry, trips, etc....I thought the house was bought by Kathleen & SHE was the main breadwinner. Maggie even said that Andrew hadn't worked in a long time. Then after Kathleen moved out he quit working at all....just taking pictures. And Maggie was broke too. Where'd they get the money?

I desperately want to see a story about the rival plastic surgeon with the big fake tits. I'd love it if Kathleen, finally deserpate to get tits, end up having to to go to her, only to end up bullied by her bigger, better, more natural looking breasts, while she gives Kathleen a pair of bolt-ons. Maybe Maggie and JoAnn show up that the end to join the doctor in laughing at her obviously fake tits, as she becomes a slave to her rivals better breasts...the breasts she wishes she had.

Loved GG's like I always do with you're big series but I can't help but notice just like in Trilogy of Tits and Terror this one is also a huge bridge to The War. Not a bad thing the world building so far is awesome but I don't know I just can't wait till you drop that huge epic on this site man.

Just plain awful story telling. Ugly, unlikable characters with no entertainment value whatsoever.

1 star

Awesome story as always plus I love the Universe building going on in your stories.

I'm also really pumped for the war between the Witches and Nuns, it's going to be biblical.

Anyone else super hyped?!

I love your stories, but this just left me disappointed. The last chapter was all talk except for one sex scene that didn't last long. It got boring at the end. Sorry. Please continue writing though.

Like the additional story arc with the unknown "boss" who like to get Kathleen working again. Sounds promising and a nice addition to the "slut gets husband an leaves wife destroyed behind"

Cheating , rough sex, one instance of a threesome and a peripheral involvement in producing pornographic material- big deal. Nothing really nasty in any of these. All of these are consensual acts in any case.

The only nasty thing that Andrew did, or indeed most of Talkman's male leads do is humiliation of the wedded wife. The only exceptions in Talkman Universe are the fathers and sons who engage in taboo incest.

No inkling of any kinky sex, non consensual sex, orgies, or even sex in public. I think there is still an air of innocence or rather naïveté in all of these male leads. Indeed they come close to the Greek archetypal heroes- sexy hunks with a serious flaw.

I don't get why the wife is getting so fucked over. Did I miss something? I don't understand why the shitty people are getting everything they ever wanted.

I've been a silent reader for a long time, but seeing as I literally keep refreshing for new updates, I have to say...

Damn you, TheTalkMan, you are a freaking master, sure, there are typos sometimes (those are just annoying) but you are still amazing, I mean, I can't even read other stories on this website without comparing it to you, oh and for this epilogue? Yeah, it's mostly just advancements, you should've wrapped it up at ch. 4, still love your stories though.

Oh and I know, this has nothing to do with anything, but can you write a story between Helena Cline and Bill Savage? I just want to see an unstoppable force against an immovable object.

The talk man i am you bigggestfan please write more snd update the story

Surrounded by sluts from ch5 and take it to the ch 15

.. a pleasure to see you update xD As always your writing hits all the right spots, but I still can't comprehend why you are avoiding the super hero/super villaines subject. Seem like it would be right up your alley. Anyways, maybe some day, just keep writing !

Desperate to read the next chapter of this now, could Kathleen finally gets the giant tits that help her take Maggie down? Or could Tracy destroy Maggie herself and Kathleen too, fantastic work and the best writer on the site

...if a bit long. Your stuff is all quite similar but sexy nonetheless. I do wish you'd give us a few more incest stories though.

I would to suggest for you to make a story about a man who like to seduce another married man.It will be so hot.Just like ur other story but with different gender.

I feel like the last page have something to do with madeline vs mother superior

Pretty good. Though I disliked the fact that the story centered on implants. I personally love it when the ladies are natural. Implants feel like inferior knockoffs to me. And it's basically cheating! Still a well written story regardless. Can't wait for the upcoming epic!

Okay, Chapter 4 was hot, when Andrew had a soul and was going through struggles and being tempted. But this chapter was just truly disturbing. I felt so terrible for Kathleen the whole time that it couldn't be hot at all. Please, give her her retribution.

Also, for some constructive criticism, I think you could do with a little more insight into Andrew's head. It doesn't make sense that he'd go from a man so desperate to hold onto his love for his wife to this soulless asshole so quickly.

This is good shit TalkMan. It's similar to your other good shit, but it's still good shit, so it's fine.

Also, to the anon with the top comment, just imagine Kathleen is Anita Sarkeesian. The sympathy will go away fast. ;)

Maggie's a slut has nothing to make her likeable!

Andrew is the pussy in this story !

And you seem to have a thing about tearing down

the main character in each story I've read by you!

You don't leave the story with a plausible ending!

And slot doesn't make sense! Where did Andrew get the money

buy all that stuff for the whore!

You could have at least given Kathleen her due!

The ending didn't make sense either!

Given Kathleen her revenge would have made this so better!

small tits lose. Every. Time.

That's your whole story, in 5 chapters. What a waste. Ridiculous.

Glad so many of your fans enjoyed it. Guess it really does take all kinds.

Good luck with future writing.

hope you update soon like that tawny and the baseballer story that sounds interesting hope there is a new story soon thanks

Strange ending. Part of me was expecting it all to be some sort of trick by Maggie, and Kathleen ends up locked in a cage somewhere and forced to watch them fuck every day. Wouldn't have surprised me.

A few things that bothered me:

-Your use of the word 'boobs' and other ridiculous names. Not sure what you were thinking.

-Maggie completely swapping Andrew's personality was already hard to swallow, but then the mentor's complete turn around was way too far.

-I personally think the hottest part of stories like this is the secrecy. There was way too little time between Andrew and Maggie fucking, to them getting caught in the act. I would have preferred there to be subtle hints at what Andrew was doing, then he convinces her that she's just being paranoid, THEN when she loves and trusts him more than ever, she catches them in the act.

Still one of the better stories of this kind on the site. Too few writers go down paths as dark as this, so well done.

This is well-written; certainly better than many of your older stories, which are already fantastic from a content perspective but sometimes show flaws in mechanics, plotting, or pace. This is a much more refined effort. It’s gratifying to see an author evolving. No idea why these types of stories resonate with me but I enjoy them all the same. The eroticism mixed with comedy is compelling.

Kathleen is too pure. It’s like kicking a dog. I get that a central theme of these stories is a slut turning a faithful husband from his perfect relationship, but this one is just a bit too far. I ended the story, and certainly read through much of it, feeling sorry for Kathleen more than anything. This particular story seems to turn more on exposing Andrew as ultimately shallow rather than the scheming slut showing herself to be more exciting and ultimately a better match. Kathleen carrying over her cold persona to her personal life might have alleviated this to some extent. Or perhaps this is just a darker path than previous stories.

Overall a good story and I hope you continue writing in this vein. I’ve read most or all of your works and enjoyed just as many. Perhaps my issue is that parts of this particular story just resonate too deeply with me for me to read it as purely a fantastical lark. Can’t win ‘em all!

Well I got sucked in.....and it was worth it! Well written, lots of sex to keep one very interested and all were looong ones, but I personally don't mind. Waiting for the other shoe to drop on Andrew....but a good ending never the less. I be reading all your stuff!

This ending actually opens the door for another story. It can be just focused on Kathleen and leave Maggie, JoAnn and Andrew out of it OR turn it into a revenge story. I'll leave it with you, but don't throw it away.

What happens to Dr Heller. A follow up story on her journey.

A follow up story is required to this. I'm curious as to how the plot and characters develop.

Honestly I think a follow on for Kathleen is needed. I think she figures out what's going on and ask for some of the D in return. Also I would like to see JoAnn have her own story as well. Her bit could been more drawn out IMO.

That said top shelf stuff here.

There should be a follow up to this story . It leaves a lot of things open . I know it's been about 4 years since the last chapter

Great, keep it up

The whole series was amazing. Vividly written & I couldn't stop reading it.

I appreciate and congratulate all the author's work for the effort to write a long work here in literary, that's hard to find. The benefit of a long story is that you can build Maggie's seduction well and build the characters better and it was nice to read but you were stretching it so much your story was crossing the line of tiring I think you could have cut excrescences and have left smaller.

About the sex: I liked the first erotic scene of Andrew and Maggie on the beach, that was the right tone of writing, but after that the erotic scenes are very wordy, leaving the text polluted and bloated, and full of screams the whole time, and all the time the characters swearing so much that it makes the scenes ridiculous and unfortunately I don't find it as erotic as I wanted it to be, as it was Andrew and Maggie's first sex, but these problems continue afterwards until the end of the story. It feels like you have a need to make the characters scream to show you're good, rather than relying on the description, sorry I didn't come here to see a generic porn movie.

Andrew: For someone who resisted so much, he fell too fast, after the first sex with Maggie he already let her into his house, and it only gets worse, he is brainwashed and does whatever Maggie wants against his wife, which Andrew becomes, what he does, and when Kathleen saw them in the bathroom, it's over the top, unrealistic, and I don't think it's believable at all. It's a shame to see a story that took so much time to deliver what we want, it's a mess, and bad, it leaves a very bitter taste in my mouth.

If the sex scenes were well written, and Andrew was more believable in his downfall, I wouldn't hesitate to give it 5 stars, and it would be one of the best stories I've ever read with this premise, I'll only give it 3, sorry if it was too harsh , but it was a little disappointing for me.

I think my biggest problem with this story is Andrew, how he behaves after having sex with Maggie, you made him resist too much, you wasted too much of the story, after the first sex Andrew fell downhill all at once, it seems like you were tired and just wanted to get it over with. It would be better if he cheated in part two on the beach, then he would go back to denying Maggie, but now Andrew would be a little more vulnerable, and the and the other 3 parts would be him slowly giving in to Maggie, the second sex, then the third, and then he would reluctantly take Maggie as his lover. It's a bittersweet ending when Kathleen finds them out, the weight of dirt and betrayal and divorce will fall on his shoulders, as people will know what he's done, and Maggie will be his consolation prize, but the guilt will remain.

@Guikilegal I think you miss the point that the reason Andrew falls so quickly after the first sex is in part because he has already been worn down by Maggie over the previous weeks. TheTalkMan writes that the sex is so amazing that it changes people, which is the other reason for the quick fall once he cheats that first time. My personal opinion is that the breaking into the house and crazy stalking part is not believable and would in the real world have resulted in a call to the police from Andrew. Imo the story would have been better with this not included. I do think the slow subtle seduction over months that was described would have made for a better story. It would not have needed pages more dialogue and could have been done in a couple of paragraphs, describing how Maggie slowly escalated as the photo shoots carried on over weeks or months.

I loved how the story descended into humiliating Katherine. I've loved home wrecker erotica where a husband cheats on his wife, right under her nose. The husband cheating in his marriage bed, the mistress wearing the wife's clothing while she fucks the husband,l. The wife hearing them have sex, maybe because the other woman moves in with them, maybe even sharing their bed. The wife is ether clueless, naive, or submissive. In one scenario the mistress stuffs the wife's panties after wearing them soaking up their cum. When Maggie wears Katherine's clothes, stretching them, or destroying them. Having Andrew cum on her favorite shirt. This story reached its cruel apotheosis. Also it's such a turn on when the mistress convinces the husband to ridicule and berate his wife. What exceeded my own kinkiness was Andrew fucking Maggie over Katherine while she slept in their marriage bed and Maggie rubbing her tits on Katherine while belittling her was the ultimate humiliation. Fucking in front of Katherine was an incredible reveal, and Andrew continuing and disparaging Katherine until he creampies Maggie was incredible. As was having Katherine mentor betray her..

I hope you write more stories that even exceed this one. The whole thing was such an incredible seduction. I also loved how you included Katherine in the story, her submissiveness is the key to why this story is not.

This story is absolutely disgusting, and you have no talent at all. Seriously. If you like cheating so much, I hope your significant other gets stolen from you you heartless fuck. Cheating is not a link. And should

be shamed. This is no different than ugly bastard porn. Honestly Kathleen is hotter than Maggie any day.