All Comments on 'Ghost Cruise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved the story

A couple of corrections need to be edited out as they throw the reader (at least me) off for a second from the flow of the story!

darkoverlord6darkoverlord6about 6 years agoAuthor
Corrections

Thanks to those folks who pointed out some grammar mistakes I made. The current version has benn edited and should be easier to read.

danteifaadinkradanteifaadinkraalmost 5 years ago
impressive

nice characterization, plot, pace and memorable sex scenes, as usual

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New Writer with interest in Science Fiction , Fantasy, and Horror genres. Grew up on Godzilla and Ultraman back in the Seventies. I guess Im kind of a nerd, love Star Trek, Star Wars, Doctor Who, and watching classic 1950's sci fi movies. Got into writing on Literotica as a...