All Comments on 'Ghost in the Machine Ch. 01'

I definitely hope this is not the end. Hoping to see you soon.

@Kolrin

You're my first commenter here, and I'm glad you like my stuff.

Well, it was INTENDED as a one-shot, literally. Thanks to redskyes though, this thing has taken on a life of its own and grown well beyond what's here. I have six completed "episodes" so far, with a seventh in the works. Two and three I've recently submitted, so they should show up eventually.

So happy to see this posted. :)

@redskyes: And I'm so happy to see you posting here.

Hopefully I don't need that flame-retardant suit you gave me... *grin*

Glad to hear that this is being continued. Good story!

Very sexy. I like this a lot. The idea behind it, the way you painted the world with a few words, the mysterious ghost, all of it combines to an excellent beginning to a promising series. I'm just glad the next chapter is already listed in your profile, which is where i'm headed next.

I hope i enjoy that one as much as i have enjoyed this one!

Gotta say I'm a fan. Fixin' to read part 2....zapped thru the hardware connection...hmmmm...ya know, my favorite part about Blade Runner was the atmosphere....really believable, and that's what I like about what I've read so far. Kudos and thanks!

Looking forward to more, seems like you built this environment up way too much to call it quits without taking advantage of it

And very good

JC

The world building is superb. Looking forward to reading more.