All Comments on 'Ghost in the Machine Ch. 02'

It WAS as good as the first, if not moreso. I do wonder what our little ghost actually IS, and where she came from. And I want to know more about Vi too. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I hope you don't do what some authors do, and create a fantastic world for us and stop halfway through though.

@Neurotoxin: Can't make any definite promises, with life being the chaos that it is.

I dearly love cyberpunk, and for as long as I find hooks to keep the reader interested, I will continue. Should the story have to come to an end for whatever reason though, I'll try to answer all open questions, though. With chapters 4-6 ready and 7 in the works, this point is still quite a ways off, and the story has barely kicked off besides.

Yep, gonna be a wild ride...like the idea of a AI that's willing to fight for its existence....a rogue AI going up against a cybernetics cartel....lay on, and don't worry about impatient readers:))))))

I have plans to keep prodding him should he slow down too much on the story. We're currently working on fixing a few issues with chapter 5 while pointing out a few things for later on. There's quite a bit of life just waiting to come out Blind's fingertips.

... the gift. Vision and the ability to communicate it, rare and wonderful. Thanks for sharing. . . . . . . p.s. Cyberspace may not be the last frontier. If it is the case that our perspective as humans in this seeming 3D universe is blind to some fundamental/foundational aspects of existence then there may be further realms for you to explore and share with us.