by Blind_Justice
... BACK, Thank Goodness! Meanwhile I'll stay perched here on the edge of cyberspace practicing my patience.
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p.s. Great Stuff ..... as usual.
Dam..!
Dam your back..! Was wondering if you was going to continue. So frank got his ass handed to him again by the monster.. Lol. Hope cat can talk some since into this thing or I don't things willl be the same in Kansis anymore.
Glad to see you again.
More More writing.......!
Ghost.
When you have a character ask a question, such as -- "Now what?" he asked -- don't put it as "Now what," he asked -- if there is a question being asked, you ARE supposed to put a question mark inside the quotation marks. It is an exception to the rule, but whenever a question is asked, there is always a question mark.
I know it's a small thing, but it makes it a lot easier to read.
Other than that, as I said, great story!
... at this overwhelming reception. Life just happens, don't hold it against me too much.
@cittran: Noted. I will talk with my editor about it.
@Anonymous: Thanks for the praise, but who the hell is Frank? :)
This is one of the best stories I have ever read by far, if I could I would give it 20 points out of a possible 10. I loved the whole series, and I hope you write more soon. I need to know what happens to Cat, if Nero finds her, and what Shiny and Parker do to help! Please update soon.
Really enjoying this series, also enjoying Leo!
Please say you're continuing both!
Yeah, whenever I get the chance. A certain elven mage is keeping me busy and I'm getting geared up for the next installment of Cat too. I hate to repeat myself, but life's a bitch right now and my circumstances are hardly conductive to creative work.