All Comments on 'Ghost Mistress'

Definitely continue this. This has fantastic premise and could really grow into an amazing story. I can imagine that eventually, once she becomes semi-real, she could be taken out, under certain conditions... Great stuff.

I really enjoyed this - you should continue with this theme. 4 *s for now, 5 if there is more - if it's as good as this!

Intriguing idea, and a great start to the story. I like your descriptions of the protagonist's predicament, they really drew me in.

I think this has a lot of potential, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Keep writing! :)

Great story really exciting if only it was longer :-)