All Comments on 'Ghosts Ch. 09'

Five stars from me;)

Loving the character development! Definitely one of the most unique stories I've read. Nice work!!

Could use less of the addiction element, though... Consider it?

it's brilliant. Interesting and unpredictable characters, mysteriously unclear yet enticing story line. So much potential. Thanks for making your chapters a bit longer. I could really sink into the later chapters.

I'm very much looking forward to more.

I think... I think our girl could be making the monster fall for her. For realz. Either way, what comes next is really going to amaze.

You have fans. You have followers. You have a gift. Please continue gracing us with your story. Whatever you choose, thank you for what you've already provided.

Ok, so I'm guessing this will be a one month installation and not 2 wks. I've been checking your site daily waiting for your newest entry. I don't mind the addiction as much as I hate all of her anxiety. She can be a little pathetic at times, that the thought of her being a lone for 3 days is very unbelievable. You can feel her strength just under all the damn weakness she allows to over take her. But as I ponder and reread what I just wrote, and I do have to truly look at the real human emotion of fear and can understand that she is just scared shitless by everything about him and the situation at whole. And that makes me smile, I just wish she was less pathetic and more centered. You would think with all the fucking drugs she does, that creates her unstable imbalances and swings she so often has. The expression "lemon" was a very accurate definition for her. If he were to kill her and go get a new toy, it would effect this story one bit. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next installment to see some change in her. Hopefully their time away will allow her to gather herself together and get a real handle on things and start acting a little normal, whatever that is. Again... great job, I cant wait for the next chapter. See you next month. Kisses

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IF HE WERE TO KILL HER AND REPLACE HER WITH ANOTHER TOY, THAT WOULD NOT EFFECT THIS STORY AT ALL. HER WEAKNESS IS MAKING HER LOOSE FOOTING AND PURPOSE IN THIS STORY. UNFORTUNATELY, SHE'S REPLACEABLE AND YOUR VAMP IS VERY INTRIGUING, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE ON HIM...LICKING LIPS.....

Absoulutely wonderfull and suspensfull. Great charachtors and plot! Thete had better be more!

Please don't keep us waiting too long for more. I feel like you get how a traumatized, terrified girl in an almost hopeless situation might feel and act. She is living as a complete slave to what seems to be basically the equivalent of a psychotic killer... I think her responses however "weak" by some standards seem quite realistic, especially considering her past abuse and missing memories. On the other hand, your vampire is revealing himself to be more and more likeable.

There are lots of elements to this story that I enjoy. The mystery, drug addiction, control, defiance and fear, not forgetting the sex, of which I would like more, a spanking wouldn't go amiss either. Very well written and imaginative.

I like this, I want more, please.

interesting way of depicting vampires

This is better than a lot of books - I'm totally sucked in!! You drop details about the new world these guys live in (the F-virus, hierarchies, etc) at just the right pace. Not to mention, the whole thing is hot as hell. But more than that, awesome story. Bookmarked for sure!!!

I love the fact your main character is so real. I like the way she has enough spirit to want to leave, enough self-awareness to realize her life is fucked, and enough sense to understand she has to cooperate in order to survive.

Love it. More please!

This story is so well written and one of my favorites. It's been so long since you posted. I hope you're okay.

I keep checking in the hope that you'll continue this wonderful story. Please come back and finish it...pllllllleeeease!

This is one of those rare stories that keeps me wondering, thinking, pondering...long after I've finished reading. Check back nearly daily since the last chapter was posted. Been reading Lit for years and this is truly one of the best. Please don't let it end here.

keep the stories coming~!

Great first chapter to an epic vampire novel! We are dying waiting for the rest! Please, please put us out if our misery!

Please write more chapters?!? So good!

Omg. U can't leave it like this. Please finish.

This is one of my all-time favorite stories, and not just on Literotica. The writing style is fantastic, the characters are compelling, the sex is just what I like - without any judgement or softening of the obvious fucked up pieces - and it just makes me both pleased and satisfied to reread it. Thank you for gifting us these pieces. I know it's been a while, and I just hope you are doing well. Even if we never get to read more of these characters and their mysteries, thank you for letting us see these parts. I would absolutely love to read more. Were it a book, i'd buy it immediately. But I know continuing writing is sometimes difficult, whether it's lacking inspiration or drive, or even feeling bored or like it's not good enough. Please believe me when I say I'm a very big fan of your writing style, your characters, this entire vampire concept, just...all of it. It always makes me feel a little better - even with the dark bits of the story - to reread these chapters. So thank you.

Cos it's hot af. Love the mix of dark horror and noncon

I just finished reading this and I absolutely loved it, and everything about it made me want to know more. I know it has been many years since this was written but it would mean a lot to know what happens to these characters. Sidenote but i feel like all the characters are very real and whole.