All Comments on 'Gia and Gerald'

Amazing story!

This was great! The pacing was perfect, the build up of sexual tension felt natural, and the pay off was amazing. The writing was excellent and the sex scenes were hot without turning into page long overly detailed affairs. I have to say this is truly some of your best work and it's definitely getting 5 stars.

I must say that this story had a far more natural feeling to it than most of your other works. Your other works always seemed to emphasize in a slightly surreal fashion that the mothers are fated to love their sons more than any other man, while this one just felt like a mother and son who came to fall in love with each other by random chance. Now I'm not saying either is good or bad, honestly both styles have their merits. I only mention it since it stood out me for some reason.

Either way keep writing more amazing erotica!

Reminds me of the many great erotic movies of long ago.

The actresses they had back then.

Julie Condra

Shannon Whirry

Kari Wuhrer

Athena Massey

Alyssa Milano

Tanit Phoenix Copley

Jacqueline Lovell

Natasha Henstridge

Brenda Bakke

Tracy Ryan

Jennifer Rubin

Krista Allen

Tanya Roberts

Julie Strain

Jennifer Burton

Kira Reed Lorsch

Gabriella Hall

Vanessa Angel

Mitzi Kapture

Shauna O'Brien

LoriDawn Messuri

Tracy Scoggins

Sandahl Bergman

And my all time favourite Nikki Fritz.

Nothing like the shit they put out now.

Thank you for such a great story.

Great work. The story in itself is believable, it isn't far fetched to think it could happen. Moreover it is hot. As the story progress the sex tension is growing more and more until the steamy sex scenes.

Keep up the good stories.

Loved it.

This is the first time that I have given 5 stars. It deserved at least 10.8B332

Loved this story. Your plot and pacing are spot on and very believable. Very well done!

your best story for sure

I actually found some old videos my dad had to amen of my mom and him having sex. Watching them makes me want to fuck her just like Gerald did his mom. Wish me luck.

....but not your best. Enjoyed it though.

Thanks TW.

I think the buildup was good but maybe a little long. It would have been sexier if he'd cum in his mom while the camera was on them, but that's just my opinion. The epilogue was confusing, especially the bit about Paul jerking to the clip of Gia. Anyway it was a good story and I enjoyed it. Thanks.

I liked the gradual progression but I think it went a step too far on the East Coast

This was a good story. I liked the character and plot development. I appreciated the emotional development both within and between the characters. The amount of sexual activity was appropriate, not over or under done. Good work.

Awful... During the work up Gerald came across as a real Dweeb with his supposed bouts of conscious. Then, the films are supposed to be R rated? Not likely with dialog like "Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me!" she cried out. "Cum for me. Cum inside me." Scenes were so lame as to barely make it to a Z rating.

Quit reading after page 2 . . . .

It’s exiting not exciting.