All Comments on 'GianCarlo Ch. 05'

Bunga bunga party

I Miss this story hope u ubdate soon.....

I feel so sad for delia and Gian they deserve each other and to be happy poor them

.........update again soon please

ive been waiting for ever for this one ! LOVED IT.. worth the wait and absoulately moving to the heart about these two lovers' conflicts

.... i beg of you to get more as soon as yesterday! xx

Those two are so in love his father is cray cray for trying to kill Dee. What was he asking Dee to do? I hate cliff hangers please don't make us as long for chapter 6.

im hooked and there havent even been sex yet oh my lord jesus

It a fantastic story, but fuck you need to edit or get someone to do it for you! It could be so much better!

"Non posso vivere senza di te ... correre via, scappa via con me. Per favore ... per favore

"I can not live without you ... run away, run away with me. Please ... please

I'm hooked! When she said he was high, on something tore my heart to pieces I just want them to be happy! Fuck Gian's father!

I knew someone would Google translate it lol! Brownie points for ladiebrowneyez! Also to Anonymous I try to self-edit but I end up editing the story line than the grammar. I'm way too impatient for an editor, but I'll go through my stories with a fine tooth comb before I send it in.

I'm hooked. This is my fantasy story. I love it, and can't wait till the next one.

Please update asap!!! :D

Good story, writing and characters and in 5 chapters there isn't even one real sex scene ! ! I like all of them but Gian has to grow a spine a little and the all star-crossed lovers longing for each other act has to stop quickly. I mean, ok Daddy dearest is a big jerk, but the vampire stuff should be enough of an obstacle.

Omg!!! I'm so happy they finally got to see each other again!! Please update soon!!!!

This is a really good story please update soon ( in multiples chapters if possible) please... just being greedy ;)

Im writing as fast as I can unfortunately Im not a very fast writer...or reader for that matter but Im trying to crank out some quality stuff so bear with me love

this story kinda gave me a "hard-on" (not literal i'm all woman) for Italian men and the language... love the black/Italian clash that's happening in this story coupled with the supernatural element is really doing it for me.. need more much more

Its not hyphenated.

im crying with them lawd this story is amazing