by Armphid
IMHO, the introduction was too long. I mean, the story didn't really start until page 3, and honestly I almost gave up reading it even after I decided to simply skim through the intro part. But starting on page 3 it became a real 5-star story so I couldn't resist giving it a 5/5 anyways - especially since I'm one of those that's into the whole japanese erotic anime/manga/games etc. so it was easy for me to picture something like this and understand the various terms here and there that popped up.
I love the idea of superheroes having superhero sluts. Definitely want more.
Gorgeous. Slipped into a little dress and read it again. :-)
Rebecca
And HHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!
Holy bleeping bleep in the bleeper!!! That was one of the dirtiest, hottest stories I've read on this site! Bravo!
I'll agree that the beginning was a little long, almost too descriptive since it lost my attention a couple times, but I like the personalities you gave everyone, even the villians. I stuck around and it was totally worth it!
5/5 This is white-hot stuff, keep it coming!