All Comments on 'Giant-Size New Half Ch. 02'

I think this turns me on.

Well...

No, it doesn't.

I've read all these fucking cliches so many times they bore me.

Yawn.

mmmmmmmmmmmmm....nuf said....:PPP

Eh, fuck that prick! This was hot. Yes, you had some spelling and structure boo boos, but meh; it's free, generally well written, and titillating; can't beat that.

I have yet to find a story of yours I don't enjoy, and this is no exception. I liked the small, post-plowing revelation about Henken's character. Any Dom character played as purely dominant, domineering, arrogant, aggressive, "perfect," and cocksure is truly fucking boring. It's boring! And painfully one dimensional. If you have any plans for more chapters in the future that include her character, more depth would be appreciated, as a reader. The same could be said for any character.

Also, I hope CM and Achimi really "break it off" in Henken's and El Tor's asses. ;3 There's a time for grab ass and mission time ain't it. Also letting Pike and Wanderlust pummel some asses would be hot.

Good fic.

Nice. Been a long time since the first chapter. Really really hope there's a chapter 3 soon, and I hope Achimi will get a shot at Pike then because Achimi is my favorite and she didn't get any 'showtime' this time around. Also I like futa on male much more than -on female (and I really like that too~), so really crossing my fingers :)

Or maybe Wanderlust gets kidnapped or something and before the rest of the team go rescue her they need to 'relieve' some tension so they all gang up on Pike. That'd be awesome.

FUCK!!! Please more of this!!!