by CarolinaPeach
Such a beatiful, tender story, Very loving, [ not rough sex ].
Please write more about their continued story,!!.
A very erotic and heart felt tale that had this reader craving more! Very well written and enticing in a subtle manner. Also quite descriptive to bring the characters to life in the readers mind. A sequel is a moral imperative... Hee hee. Well done and thank you for this entertaining literary offering!
This is such a wonderful story. You captured me with Hannah's openness and naivety; you conveyed it so well. Sylvie, skillful, perceptive and subtle, is an excellent counterpoint to Hannah. Their loving was deeply pleasing, powerful. The twist at the end was very amusing. Thanks.
Carolina that was a beautiful story. I loved it. Please carry on writing.
This is such a sweet story of innocent love building to full passion. I loved it!