All Comments on 'Gifted Bk. 01 Ch. 10'

Adria looks to be the 4th part of the cherry pie

Dear Josh,

I enjoy your story very much even though I consider myself

straight hetero. What annoys me considerably, however, is your constant use / misuse / abuse of words like:

defiantly for definitely;

where - were;

your - you're;

there - their;

then - than;

hart - hart;

waist - waste;

etc., etc.

So, get an editor, please, to check on your spelling.

It definitely decreases not only - I suspect - my reading enjoyment.

i hope you continue this story!!

The typos and malapropisms definitely detract from the story telling, every time you hit one it ruins the flow of the tale. I voted the story at 3 stars all the way through when it was really worth 4 or even 5!

Smashing and I'd be curious to see what you'd do with this lovely trio in the future.

Why haven't you written anymore you leave a cliffhanger and don't finish. Do listen to the others about your grammar they forget that this is an amateur sight and don't have lives lol please at least show me somewhere to get the next book.

Would love to see book 2.

Great story; interesting characters, good plot, and I especially like the relationship and how it builds. Well I came for the erotic part and now I want more. Keep up the good work!

Great series. I couldn't stop until I was finished. Great characters and good dialogue. I enjoyed reading this story and will at more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.