by deathlynx
Beautiful characters, lots of love, dreams and hate. Beauty and some horror too, but everything so beautifully told. You will love it. Simply the best. Thank you for this story.
Loved this story. You really brought the characters to life and made me unable to get any sleep until I finished the whole story, I was tired when I started reading too! While I didn't like the torture of Chris, it was important to help understand everything (distasteful to me, but understood the need for it). Can't wait to check out your other stories.
These sorts of plots are the most dreadful. Pastel prose, but not too fluorescent...going fluorescent is like going full retard. My analysis shows 12% reduction in words would have made the story clearer. Well I only started at chapter 5, so maybe I didn't have enough time to get bored by too many needless words. Other than finding it generally reprehensible, the story was ok I guess, for what sense I could make out.