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by Ed0613

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Mojo648Mojo648almost 4 years ago
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You need to make this a longer story, maybe turn it from E. C into a romance, do it where he leaves the ship, for good, gets a different job locally, they become lovers without Amy knowing, after a while and many dates, move in together, then eventually Amy comes round 4 a visit, seeing her ex there and wonders what's going on, that's when Gina tells everything.

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...