by nadia877
Gina will learn how to lick pussies and,assholes of black mistresses while getting holes filled with BBC. Noo more spreadsheets and tablets to work with. Gina's hbest friend will fuck Gina's husband and keep him for herself. Gina will go on a diet and exercise program to shed excess pounds by earing one boiled egg a day while kneeling in front of mistress with hands submissively put on top of head. Mistress will prolong feeding to 60 minutes to ensure she burns off calories from boiled egg while kneeling on hard concrete floor. Her college nemisis a black bitch will buy her as a slave in a rigged auction for the princely sum of 100 pennies!
Abducted and on the way to Mexico? I'd do everything in my power to get that lethal dose administered.
Your story has taken on a tone of cruel darkness and torture and as a result has lost all sense of eroticism. The forced abortion and sterilization of the redhead was over the top cruel, which caused me to pay more attention to her subsequent treatment. After that procedure, she would be bleeding and in extreme pain. As a result, the callous treatment to transport her would cause even further injury.
I think you went too far on that bit. Had you excluded that part, the story might have remained mostly erotic, for those who can find eroticism in capture/slave type stories.
This was a bit over the top. Both the treatment of the redhead and the catheter make no sense for slaves you still want to sell anyway - this kind of treatment is being for long term complications and fit to permanently damage the health - this reducing the value of the slaves. Even a cruel slaver wants to make money...
Do alas less erotic and less logical
This kind of treatment is BEGGING
and
SO alas less...
And whatever other mistakes autocorrect introduced....