All Comments on 'Ginny Loves Lover's Daughter'

by lovingfeeling23

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Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulsterabout 1 month ago

I loved this! Fun, sexy, very erotic, and a nice surprise ending. Hmm just can’t wait for more … please need to know what Kim thinks. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

westham63westham63about 1 month ago

so very hot, i so want to cum back as a woman in my next life. sitting here with a hard cock, wanting my tongue and fingers fucking two lesbians together.

MMSdawgMMSdawgabout 1 month ago

More please!!! Loved it! Sure hope Kim isn't mad!

AliceGeeAliceGeeabout 1 month ago

That was very enjoyable and I hope this is going where I hope it's going. This definitely has potential for a hot follow up perhaps even more. Five well deserved stars.

Arch33Arch33about 1 month ago

Hope they changed the sheets....😱❤️❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

good story, the dialogue seemed a bit patchy tho. like there’s no need for a character to exclaim that another character is doing smth when it’s being shown in the prose. ton of potential, but that dialogue, especially during the sex scenes, really took me out of it.

lovingfeeling23lovingfeeling2327 days agoAuthor

Great feedback! I love constructive suggestions. I will definitely look out for that. One thing I never want to do is break the flow and pace of a scene!

PappasleazePappasleaze25 days ago

very well written, (as usual) Not only did they not know Kim arrived home early but they didn't know she had cameras in her room to record when she was with Ginny. hey great job an easy 5 stars.

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