All Comments on 'Girl In Snapshot'

A well written story. It had the right amount of history in it plus enough illusion to keep you riveted to reading it. The total build up and ending were excellent. You might consider a continuation of the story. I feel it would be well worth writing.

great story you did here I like alot good going I hope you can do more good storys

I've read two of your stories and found them to be brilliant. Like the ending of this story, reading your work really was more than just getting my rocks off. It spoke to me on other levels - about insecurity and doubt. The pieces are three dimensional thoughts. They live and breathe and think. I've never left a comment on these things before, however your work is the best I've ever come across, and I owe it to you. Keep up the truly remarkable work. I look forward to reading the rest of your stuff.

-Joel

A sensitive masterpiece on Lit.!

Thank you.

i have read several of your stories over the past couple hours and i love them all, but at the end, i always feel kind of cheated. i'm like, "this is it?!" i don't want them to end, and they end so abruptly. there need to be more sequels to your stories. or they just need to be longer. i don't know, write a book for me, that'll make me happy.

I have read all of your stories and love them all! Not your usual cliches.

Theres only a small difference between most smut stories and thats whether or not they use vulgar language but your stories they're not smut they are just erotic totally and completely its nice to see that. You're stories are absolutely the closest to perfection out thereTandokuno

Sensational work again.

I cant comment on your work other than to say that its a masterpiece. Again, I felt all the agnst, and emotion and yes even hope, I've come to expect from your stories. I mean: "Hope. She was missing that hope for the future. That idiot sense of the future that we have as brand new adults." that's just beautiful! I'm sorry, but now I need more! KEEP WRITING!!

The stories are cut off. I would like to see a continuation and an ending further along in their life.

It's almost A perfect story.But something didn't seem right.Too fast I must say.1 moment going slow but the next is 2 fast 2 catch.Good job though.

totaly unrealistic he moves in and she is 20 years older they never knew each other but when he finds the picture he is in love bullshit and when she calls and asks if she can be alone he get understandably upset but when she calls at midnight to tell him to come home he does no guy would act like that if he realy felt something for her and she asked him to stay away there is no way he would go back at least until morning and he sure wouldn't pickup the phone at midnight it's the office phone no one would be calling at that time so why would he bother picking it up a normal guy would be very hurt that she had a date and wait for her to go out then pack his stuff and move to the studio try to keep it sounding realistic this is not the fantasy area

I didn't even think this was a erotic story ,but it sure kept me interested ! Enjoyed it immensely !I will definetly look into your other works !

I really liked this story. Sex is good anytime but, in my opinion, when romance is part of the plot the sex is a lot better. The straight fuck is preferrable to a lot of oral sex. I think most people reach a point where they have had enough foreplay and want him to put that thing in her. Good job

Well written and believable.

This is one of the most beautiful story I have ever red in literotica .

it started out very strained and went downhill fast. obsessing over the picture was stupid the call at the office after midnite was dumb and him going back was assinine. it could have been a LITTLE better if we found out she was his mother not sister but only a little better.

What a fag.... go find something else to do with your time. Clearly, reading a free story is not your forte.

This is pure, simple genius. Your writing is raw, simple and wonderful. Keep it up.

What a wonderful story of 2 people making that special connection! I can identify with this, with my own sister, and it's about the love for one another that can exist only between two siblings. Some say this is wrong and against society's mores but..... when it's right it's right. Your writing is superb and I look forward to more of your good work. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I love it. Keep writing.

Wow. I can't honestly think of words that will do this justice. I'm halfway through reading it and I realize I'm just in awe of the story and writing. I certainly didn't expect to blindly walk into something here with such feeling and depth as this!

Thanks very much for writing it and sharing it with us! :)

It might have been short, but it was very sensitively told.

I really liked it !

Excellent!!! I especially loved the fact that his sister was ~20 years older than him...

You are SO SO talented...

Bill

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