All Comments on 'Girl in the Red Cloak'

Good characters, good sex. What's not to love.

I enjoyed that, am i like a person whom likes bestility, gross. For fucks sake though i knew all my kinks!

Wow, just wow. Excellent work with the clever wording and fantastic action. Rarely do you find a something both incredibly evocative paired with thoughtful writing. Eloquent and full. marks for grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Nothing kills a nerd girls lady boner like badly written erotica.

The 2nd person writing feels very odd, would be better with either 1st person or 3rd person omnipotent. As it is, I almost stopped reading before the end odf the first sex act.

No hint about what the werewolf bite does to the women, other than heal the wound instantly, or does it do anything. Or why this ceremony, was it just for the sake of sex or was there anything else.