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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Really

Nice story but the story needs to slow down a little. Not sure of the relationship with Cindy and Daisy. Also just like that she sleeps with another woman's husband. Is she a prostitute or something (paid with new clothes). Story could have been developed rather than right in to the sex. but perhaps that's what the author wanted. But even the sex was like pow done over.

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Love!

I love your story! I will throughly enjoy reading it over and over 😉

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Excellent.

That is one of the most provocative and best written shorts i have ever read. Thank you for sharing!

yourmum69ing 9 months ago

Woaah this is the exact type of stories I like!!!! But I do wish

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NOTE: read these three stories in this order; 1st - You Can't Deny Your Wolf. 2nd - The Beautiful Young Alpha. 3rd - The Chosen One. ~ I try to write easy to read stories with sexual content containing characters who have fluid sexuality. They contain obscure references, q...

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