All Comments on 'Girlfriend, What Girlfriend?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Disappointing

It started out just fine, built nicely, and then all the sex was over in a (long) paragraph. This story deserves another pass or two through the word processor.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Great job!

Great job! Please continue? Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well we at least know they have the morals and

ethics of two dogs in heat. Other than reading animals stories of what interest is this?

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