by Razmagurk
I can't even describe how hot I found this story. It took every ounce of self control I had to not go jerk off right away. I love the concept of how the protagonist has already had his (?) perception altered by the device. I really don't want to wait for more! Maybe describe the steamy sex they had when they got back? Please write more ASAP!
I love the idea, but I find it really difficult to figure out who is who and what do they look like, and if they are affecting the others or not. Maybe with names I; the dialogs would make it easier...
Really great story and idea. Cannot wait to read more. Love the way the protagonist doesn't realise when things switch.
I could not tell who was who, and who was supposed to be what gender and have what parts, both before and after swapping.
I enjoyed this a ton! Writing it from the guy’s perspective really helped show off the reality bendy bits, and kept it from being bogged down with little notes. And just felt fun!!!
Damn! This was so hot it made me drip. Holy crap! Thats a first for me! Good job 👍.
So guys have tits and girls have dicks. Is that part of the reality swap or is that just the story?
As far as I can tell, only the cheerleaders and football players in the bar got body swapped. So all the other guys still have dicks and all the normal girls still have tits.
When you said "siblings doing things siblings should not be doing" I was expecting something like robbing a bank...