All Comments on 'Girlfriends'

" I shoved my fingers in as far as they would go and brought myself to a mind shattering orgasm as I thought of how Lily touched me. ....... My fingers never seem to satisfy me anymore."

Well, which is it? Your finger never satisfy you anymore, or they bring you to a mind shattering orgasm? Seems contradictory.

Loved it! Hot, but with a sweetness to it that I enjoyed. You really grew from Dream Come True. Better character developement and pacing. Also, nothing jumped out at me as a typo, redundancy or odd word choice. I think you have the sexy romp storyline down, would love to see you write something a little longer and with more depth...

And again, your user name made me smile.

I liked it a lot. Thanks.