All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Roommate Owns Me Ch. 01'

by ymous20

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goamz86goamz86about 10 years ago
not bad

Love the idea, but it was rushed. build up the tension a little especially since the girlfriend is right next to them. Look forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
pretty good

I hope theres more explanation to why his girlfriend didnt wake up and what will happen next. Public places like at a group date in the bathroom, always a fun sex scene but just a random idea! Keep it up.

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