All Comments on 'Girls Vegas-Style'

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Pirate TregarePirate Tregarealmost 11 years ago
a little too fast-developing, but well done

I gave it a 4, but it could've been a 5 with a little more set-up, dialogue and sex-act description. The "reveal" seems like it should be a bit further down the road, so he's totally 110% into "her" making his acceptance an obvious next step.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Agree with Pirate.

The only problem with the story is that there wasn't more of it. More about them, more buildup up, more action......but hey, it's a quickie!l. Look forward to more.

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERalmost 11 years ago
loved it

loved it black trans just hurt me anyway and this was hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Got a hard on reading this sexy story,

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Looking for that kind of a woman when I’m sitting at the bar

Wondering why that never happens to me around here.

Would certainly enjoy having that situation pop up with me.....often!!!!!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 2 years ago

Noooo! There needs to be a second chapter. She can't be that Hot and there be only one round.

imready2imready23 months ago

Oh fuck I loved it! This has been my fantasy for years... now just to live it out! So fucking horny I could not stop!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Mmmm.....I SO want a smoking hot trans girl!

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