by snerpyloo
I gave it a 4, but it could've been a 5 with a little more set-up, dialogue and sex-act description. The "reveal" seems like it should be a bit further down the road, so he's totally 110% into "her" making his acceptance an obvious next step.
The only problem with the story is that there wasn't more of it. More about them, more buildup up, more action......but hey, it's a quickie!l. Look forward to more.
Wondering why that never happens to me around here.
Would certainly enjoy having that situation pop up with me.....often!!!!!
Noooo! There needs to be a second chapter. She can't be that Hot and there be only one round.
Oh fuck I loved it! This has been my fantasy for years... now just to live it out! So fucking horny I could not stop!