All Comments on 'Giselle and I Ch. 01'

Good stuff here. Thanks.

keep at it, maybe one spellchecker-has-no-brain error. Did not affect the flow of things. Plenty of creativity take us away from our own lives.

Erotic, engaging, believable, bittersweet. You've immediately shot into the top tier of LW authors. Looking forward to more. 5*s

Great job! Very good character build-up, good story line, can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Amazingly well written.

Almost believable that such things happen...

i hope Ch 1 means there's more coming... Soon i hope!

But I need and ending or continuation that is worthy of the previous 5 pages... Thank you for writing a great story. Well done.

Hi

I'm taking down later chapters. So this stands on it's own, with kind of a French film ending. The later chapters started going in a direction that wasn't making me happy.

Please!?!??