All Comments on 'Give a Name... Ch. 02'

So far it's really good but you put commas all over the place where they're not needed.

It's kind of confusing.

Thanks for the feedback. You are right! My insecurities with writing in a second language makes me over zealous in such areas...

I hope you enjoy it though! And I am still looking for an editor!

Xoxo

Hi, I don't read this genre but I've noticed your comments in the Feedback Portal about requiring an editor. If you can't find one through the Volunteer Editors link then perhaps you should try the Bulletin Board? There is an Editors section there that lists monthly people who are available to edit and what they are comfortable editing. Perhaps you can find someone there. You can also submit your own thread requesting an editor :-)

Thanks for the head up! I think I will post a thread, maybe my savior will come to me by then. *-*