All Comments on 'Give It a Shot'

this type lesbian action just sucks, not sexy, not erotic, rated 1

"Anonymous" is an idiot. This is great. What happens next?

I was really enjoying this story, right up until the point where pee started to get involved.

If that's something you want to write about, then by all means, please do, but please just leave a quick message at the start of your stories to let your readers know what sort of thing's they're about to read about, in case there's going to be something in the story that they really don't enjoy.

Other than that though, I thought it was really quite a nice little story.

I agree with the last person...some warning would be nice. This story was so hot and so well written...but the pee just ruined it for me. Still giving it a 5 just because your writing style is so delightful c:

At least once I would (I think) like to experience something like that! Being sexually submissive to someone I meet in a lesbian, dyke club for a whole night. That's one of my sexual fantasies.

Orpheum69