All Comments on 'Give Me an Ohhhhhhh!'

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loquereloquereover 10 years ago
Solid erotic story.

How is this rated below a 4? This should be, much much much much much higher. The imagery the intense passion, your style. Everything seemed to make the sex and story pop. 5 stars from me!

storytymestorytymeover 10 years agoAuthor
You are too kind

Thank you loquere for your kind comments. I am glad you appreciated the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5 from me too. Good story. Never heard the emotions of a game told from a cheerleader's viewpoint before. Plus the passionate lust ending in contentment was great.

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