All Comments on 'Given and Taken Ch. 02'

write more please.....try to make it longer.....want to hear more!

Not another vampire love story. I was truly hoping for a different creature of the night, something unknown. Something different than this over used cliche.

The fear and conflict shown by Eli; the emotions and concerns shown by Alistair... great job. I really like how this is developing!

I am loving this story. Please, please, please keep writing! Would like to see a longer chapter next time but anything would be great. I am loving the fact that you are writing about a vamp finding his love. I'm just a sucker for that kind of story lol!

I love your story. I hope it not takes too long for you to submit the next chapter. I can't wait .. Thx for you to submit the next chapter. I can't wait .. Thx

I'm glad I found a new story to obsess over for awhile. I hope I see a new chapter soon, keep up the great work!

Oh u tease u! This is by far the best story I've read!

SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! I can't wait for the next one, please don't make us wait too long! Cheers :D

well done...can't wait to read more!

I'm not gonna hurt you... I will cause you pain.... You're safe with me...I will punish you... You're my love... You're my slave

Ya, no. Don't try to "church it up" you're a rapist, a murderer, and you get off on sadism. Good job fuck head. Why don't you go die in a hole. You want love? Trust? Earn it.

The assholeish comment prior. Very well written.

Loved this and do hope you continue.