All Comments on 'Giving In'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good start,

Please carry on, so in answer to your question, YES>

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
More please

I really would like to see you continue. Your style is concise mainly due to the character's voice. He has made up his mind and the adventure is beginning. Please don't deprive us of seeing where you intend for them to go.

Peace and joy,

Shell

nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
I knew your writing

was familiar! I read your sci fi story, and loved it. This was just as good, and I do hope you continue on with this one and the others.

2hot2m82hot2m8about 13 years ago
Lured In

Sounds like an awesome orgasm! That's hot!

tturtle50tturtle50about 13 years ago
I never!!

I never got a massage!! Thanks for the story.. To old now!! But a great way to get what you want!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
are u kidding me?

Only one of them truly got the 'happy ending' special. hope you continue, turnabout is fair play.

markindymarkindyalmost 13 years ago
Great story..

Enough detail to keep things interesting, without dragging out the action too long. So similar to my first experiences in college...a great trip down memory lane in many ways.

dreamingofblowingdreamingofblowingover 12 years ago
Very good story

I'm not sure if it is the fulfillment or the act of submitting that is more erotic. Either way, right now I am very wet indeed. I have fantasies very similar to your story. Please check out mine and let me know.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 7 years ago
I'd hate it if it were me

I've heard it mentioned "it feels the same if it's gal or a guy" giving you a blow job or more other non-gender oriented sex play when your blind folded and can't see. It might be good way as an intro, I'd hate not being able to watch and see reactions while it's happening. But then I wouldn't turn it down either. I "Give In" either way if offered. I Enjoyed the script.

montyw47montyw47over 2 years ago

Is this the end? Just like that? I know it has been asked before, Please Sir, More!

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