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Anonymousover 16 years agoWriter ask's for a generous score. I complied ---
The score I gave it is generous
Anonymousover 16 years agoGenerous at first, but then I read it
Way too long. Should have broke it up into a series, putting more details into it. As it stands, it was long and boring with little substance. Nevertheless, I good try. Don't give up and try again.
DesireeFoxalmost 11 years agoJust as good on a second read
but yes it could have been better by breaking into 2 more chapters and a little mor daily life and a little more detail in the club still a 4 squirter
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis is probably my favourite story on Literotica. The author does an amazing job of storytelling. I would love to see a second chapter.
normanbybayviewabout 1 month agoGreat story. You're really good at the big picture. Would have love to see more details and slow down during the nice bits, would be my feedback.
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