All Comments on 'Giving It All Away Ch. 01'

by PrivateMaster

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
I like it - you should write more!

Hello, PrivateMaster, and welcome to Literotica - and for this fine first chapter of a story I hope you will continue. You write well and I would love to see where this might go - please tell us - five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Intrigued

A great start. One that has me intrigued. I hope you continue:)

MissPlayPrettyMissPlayPrettyabout 10 years ago
please don't stop....

I love the build up, the tension and the anticipation of what might happen next

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