by oiyabugger
That was really great! I dont usually get turned on by anal, but that was hot. I liked how the parts with becca were sexual, but also kind of romantic. It would be so cool to see a sequel with the two girls. Youre very good at descriptive writing.
My first attempt at an adult story. I didn't get many rave reviews for part 1 and 2 but it was fun to write. Perhaps one day i'll do another. who knows
Have fun reading.
Oiyabugger
this was a fun story... one thing though... never go ass to pussy... I know it's fiction and reluctant/non-con but it just makes me cringe to think about... it's the same reason women are supposed to wipe front to back and not back to front.
Rugby lads are randy as fuck. If you ever thought of adding a third part, how about the team bus breaks down and the squad have to overnight in a hotel, where they spend their time screwing every willing female in the place - and that's quite a few.