All Comments on 'Go West, Young Man! Pt. 05'

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goducks1 about 5 years ago

i gave it 5 stars - reluctantly

it all seemed a little rushed, and a heavy emphasis on toys, etc. not my cup of tea. but i liked all the other chapters so far, so momentum carried this over the line!

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

I didn't enjoy the way this chapter wrapped up. I don't know what I would have done differently. I just didn't enjoy it.

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...

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