All Comments on 'Gobbles Blowjob Bar Franchise'

Very inventive and right into the style of writting used by real life Journo's

Good, original theme for a story. Perhaps you could expand this theme even further, like its discovered that it has the properties of keeping eternal youth. Then you could have 18 to 30 years old getting hooked on the treatment.

Great piece -- a blast to read something different!! Keep it up.

Pulitzer Prize... ahhh! I read halfway through before I got it. Funny.

Loved it, needs a sequel.

I really enjoyed the story and the writing style. Such a shame it isn't an actual article based on a true story. Cheers

I really enjoyed this tongue-in-cheek tale. The final few lines made me laugh. I like the inference that connects the empty prison cells to men getting satisfied...lol

I imagine heaven to be like this haha

Really a hot story, and I hope you write more. I have heard many housewives go to Jamaica and other islands for a girls only vacation and they comment that white women have a real thing for black guys. They claim the fresh fruit diets alter the taste and the ladies go crazy. But that is another story....

This is one of my favourite stories of all time. If you ever feel like it I would love to see more stories set in this world, maybe you could do one from a POV of a guy going about a normal day in this world. Or one about when a guy turns 18 and he goes though his first experiences in this world.