All Comments on 'Goblin Maid, Young Master Ch. 01'
by North200
- 16 Comments
DeathAndTaxesover 6 years agoOff to another great start!
Somewhere in Edward's future: "Hey man, remember that one time you got drunk and had sex with a goblin? Good times!"
karalineover 6 years ago...but I'll say it again.
I am so impressed with how different the tone of your writing is in this work, in comparison to your other stories. I'm a bit jealous if I'm honest. It's a sign that you're a true master of the craft.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI gave you a 4*
please keep this one going into a huge series and please don't make us wait more than a few days to a week in between the chapters. Better to write multiple chapters and post them one at a time then write one at a time and make us wait a couple of weeks to a month.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThank you for sharing your stories! Such a pleasure...well proofed, and clever. I'm really looking forward to more of Ree.
:-D
Anonymousover 6 years agoAs anonymous below cites: "If you can taste it you're not eating fast enough." I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard!
I'm curious what will happen to Ree...
Please continue this arc. It has me hooked in these four pages!
sshh1over 6 years agoVery good story. It's very creative. I love how you describe humans through her eyes. I never talked how strange we are! I can't wait to read more and find out w heat happens
Horseman68over 6 years ago..... with totally intriguing dialogue and female (?) lead. Am in love with Ree. More, more, and more.
nthusiasticabout 2 years agoYour Ree is so funny! She has no idea why Master was unhappy when she ate his cat, not to mention building a fire in the dining room! Ree is right. Humans do have a lot of rules and many don’t make any sense. LOL Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Neverwrongabout 1 year agoExcellent worldbuilding, enough detail for the story to work without going overboard while focusing on the important facets, the characters.
