All Comments on 'Gobsmacked Ch. 05'

and other places. Glad you are writing more in this series.

You always add something different to each chapter. This time fisting. With so many women still to unfold, this series has a way to go. Keep it up! It is hot with the use of everyday women, not glamour babes, could be any neighborhood.

Loved the series, it was erotic, affectionate and totally sexy would have loved to read more, so dont stop the good work..

UNO ESTRELLA

My issue with this Fantasy is that a wife's sexuality is for her Husband, and her Husband alone. The Treasure of her pussy being for her husband automatically goes from being a Treasure to Trash when she starts slutting around. When a wife promises to "forsake all others" she is promising that her pussy is for her Husband, and her husband alone. A husband usually takes pride in having an attractive wife that other may desire, but is his all alone. Young girls don't understand this. That their body, as attractive as it maybe, is desireable to a man. They want to enjoy her body. If she becomes a whore, like Janet, in this story, She is Not only disrespecting her husband, herself but also her family and anyone else who cares about her. I apologize to the BigKahuna for reacting so badly to this Excellent Writing and Excellent Story. But a "clueless" hubby coming home from weeks away to find his Treasured Wife passing out fucks to the neighbors, like Candy on Halloween, would break my heart. I have shared ALL my women, in my life. So you would think that I could "get into" this Fantasy. Somehow, I just can't. To me, this story represents the biggest betrayel possible. THE BIGGEST BETRAYAL by a wife, possible. Divorces from cheating are usually from a spouse just having sex with one person outside of the marriage. But for a wife to fuck the whole neighborhood, over and over, for an 18 hours orgy would be 1000 times worse. No Longer can Hubby go anywhere without fearing his wife is fucking a neighbor again. I mean, I been there. My 4th wife, DeeDee, was always collecting phone numbers where ever she went. So much so that I couldn't leave the house without her making a call and have some guy over to fuck her within 30 minutes. Maybe her betrayal is why I don't really care for this Fantasy. When a wife fucks around on her husband, and the husband finally realizes it, it makes the man feel inadequate. Worthless, and eventually begin to hate himself for NOT being good enough for his wife to stay loyal to him. I know of 3 beautiful, very busty, Blonde women whose husbands took their screwing around to total destruction and heartache, and committed suicide. Maija, who lived with me described the horror of her husband coming out of the shower, with a towel wrapped around him, hiding his .45acp behind his back, to sit across from his wife Maija. Then he proceeded to explain that he knew what she had been doing, put his .45 in his mouth and blew his brains out. Splattering her with his brains. I can't imagine how much she screamed at the time. But I knew her a few years later, and she was really fucked up. So, thanks for letting me Vent, The BigKahuna worked hard writting this story and he did a good job. I respect his hard work even if I didn't like this fantasy. Swingers and Swinging need excellent communication between the spouses to stay married. Without Trust and Respect a marriage can't last. I don't Janet has ANY respect for her Hubby in this story. The hubby had absolutely ZERO communication that his wife intended to become the worst slut possible, so No communication either. I apologize for my initial reaction. Janet will end up living with that Black Fellow she keeps fucking. Just so you know, at an 18 hour orgy, a woman can fuck almost the entire time. Her Husband could maybe fuck 3 or 4 women depending on his age. That means that for probably 12 hours hubby is feeling "left out" while his wife is just being a Whore/Slut. Nothing against whores. I have had 3 different ones live with me. thanks, #BUSTER2U