All Comments on 'God of Whores Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story but

Athens is not in the Peloponnesus, and Thebes is not on Crete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oops!

I appreciate the correction, anonymous. I think I might have intended to use the Mediterranean region in the former and accidentally used an "in" mistakenly in the latter, I didn't think one contained the other.

-V

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

This is my favourite of your stories so far! More in all respects please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Woohoo! The action begins!

Loved it! I'm glad to see you've returned to the main course - Pericles' (and Phonita's as well I guess) education in the temple.

Great chapter, loved the dynamics between Pericles and Zoe, his inner dialogue and his struggle to maintain control of a new and tough situation for him. I also loved the whole circles idea that each represents a new level in the way to the center.

I hope you continue this series and looking forward for what's next to come. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great new chapter. Keep them cumming!

Just me or did anybody else hear the rocky theme song come on during the ending scene that discussed training.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
pretty good

When is chapter 5 coming out?

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