All Comments on 'Goddess Ch. 02: Leaving Heaven Behind'

Loving the sequel! Can’t wait to see what happens!

I’m loving the detail. I love where this is heading. I could feel the angst and pain she was going through. I throughly thought they’d [Mark and Jeff] would have had a different relationship with her/ known her in a different way but honestly I love it so much. It’s amazing. Keep up the good work!!

I'm probably going to rage at the unfairness of taking all of part 2 to get to the big reveal, but I'll wait semi patiently for part 3. As long as it's soon. Well done.

Omg this was just fantastic! Im pretty sure I started cackling with glee as soon as the boys showed up - and aww they were so worried she regretted them, not just leaving! Guess she'll have to make it up to them, hopefully repeatedly.

Cant wait for part 3!

I am impressed! You conveyed your Goddess' emotions very well! Extremely well written! Those cliffhanger endings though... gah! 😉

Love this addition. The cliffhanger is killing me though. I seriously hope you don't get writers block. Did they know the whole time who she was?

I was in tears with her as her mask was broken and my heart soared with your last line. Please keep writing, you are so good at making your characters seem real.