All Comments on 'Goes Without Saying Pt. 01'

Thoroughly enjoyable story. Thank you.

I'm shaking with nerves even though I suspected that was gonna happen. Hurry up & write chapter 2 (although I think I know where it's headed....). Anyway, excellent story!!

Then why such a sad ending?

A well written story with a positive plot focusing on maturity and love. You telegraphed Gwen's death but wrote her passing realistically.

Your telegraph forecasts that Celia will come back as David's love interest. You may surprise us. Having given 5 stars the first chapter could have used more drama / conflict / emotional struggles. Looking forward to ch 2.

If it ended here I would consider a satisfactory short story, but since it is only Pt. O1 we look for ward for more interesting moments.

As per the norm, your writing is fabulous always creating empathy for the main characters and even sympathy in their trying situations, I always look forward to your offerings as I feel they relate well to the English settings

Thank you

you. An old man like me shouldn't be choking and tearing up.

Enough said.

Not fair!

Brought a tear to my eye.

This IS a porn site ya know?

So sad the loss of his true love, now where can it go from here, can he with 2 young children ever have happiness. I guess only time will tell. This is a 5 star tear jerker

You killed the good one to hook him back with the cheating slut?

And you think this is an acceptable story?

Something in my eyes, dammit. Must be the 5 stars.

Heartbreaking but so very very good. I'm hoping part 2 and on won't destroy your exemplary work by having him reconcile with Celia, but well... I'm rating this one an easy 5 stars regardless.

Fucking hell... and fucking authors who kill the best ones to maximize emotional impact 😠

Damn.

Damn. Freaking brutal.

I’ve been tense throughout… expecting disaster, but not this…