All Comments on 'Goetic Justice'

This was pretty good but you should have posted it a piece at a time. Other than that I loved it.

I hate waiting and usually get too frustrated to finish stories with many chapters/offering dates. I loved it! A little deviltry is good for the soul right?

As anyone who looks at my own writing might realize, I love romantic stories with gently dominating women. This is really good stuff, and I have to say that you're getting better as time goes on!

Some minor typos, but otherwise a solid work. I've never been a fan of femdom, but with a good story like this (and a number of your other works), I can tolerate it.

Keep up the good work!

Such a beautiful story! I love these stories of yours as thry take on a whole new dimension to the word of fantasy. Lovely cast of characters that stem from just about everywhere.

Keep continuing to amaze us readers Snekguy, I look forward to your next story and its unique characters.

The ability to to follow your heart is the definition of true love, no matter the consequences.

Fantastic. So many things I like about it. Good pacing, balanced story arc, believable characters, the MC was assertive and useful. If there was anything I'd wanted to see more of it would be struggle within the mc about being gfd'd by the demon, and maybe she could've been a bit more...scary? But her gentleness was well explained and fit within the story. Also as a general comment to your stories, sometimes I wish the sex scenes would be spaced out a bit more and escalate in length and complexity slower.

I hope you keep being productive and improving. Great work!

Very well written. Liked how you made it so detailed. The sex scenes were very long, but extremely well written. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

A breakaway from your main staple of aliens in the Pinwheel universe.

You're a great storyteller and that shines in whatever story you put to form. I'm not a fan of femdom but you are able to get my attention through your plot settings and your character building. I can skip the lewd pars if I choose to do so...

I hope you keep sharing your work with the world.

Are you intending to start putting it into book format?

Just fantastic. This story was incredibly well written and quite a thrill. If be most definately interested in more from you dealing with occult subjects such as this (or perhaps a sequel).

5***** because they don't give out tens. Quite outstanding.

Snek, I'm a sucker for all your stories, and this 5 Star one is no exception. I now know more about the Occult than I ever have, and I'm damn near 70 years old! But my friend you are a sucker for big tits, big hips, and big women. I sure hope you have or will Marry the woman of your dreams! Thanks for another great story!

words are not enough . thank you so much for this so insightful read. so looking forward to more of your awesome work.

Wow Snekguy, this is excellent. Thank you for writing and sharing this.

You've crafted a very rich and detailed story, one for which I find it delightfully easy to willing suspend my disbelief: certainly one of the marks of a fine writer!

Please keep up your fine work, I look forward to enjoying lots more of it.

Words just cannot express how much I enjoyed this story. Although my profile page doesn't show it, I've actually been doing a lot of reading on this site, over the span of a few years. This story stands out tall, clearly among the best.

Needless to say, I'm giving this 5 stars.

By far my favorite story on Literotica now. Superbly written!

So I decided to take a break from the Pinwheel storyverse and I'm very glad I did. I really liked that you went a little further than the typical demon/succubus summoning. The influences from The Book of Abramelin and The Lesser Key of Solomon added a depth that you don't usually find within this genre of stories. As someone with a lifelong fascination for alternative religions and occultism I found it to be a refreshing change from the usual halfhearted attempts at describing summoner's circles and Latin incantations.

I think this might be your best story(that I've read thus far), though the subject does hold more interest for me than the Pinwheel stories so that may be a factor. I would say there is a lot of potential for a follow up as well. A sequel or spinoff could be interesting.

I like how you focus on bigger "females" if that is the right word. Anyways you would be surprised at how much the possibility of this story actually happening is possible

Thank you for that story. I've read a lot on this site, but this one truly stands out. As a wiccan, a lot of it rings true for me spiritually, and you've done a great job capturing part of the essence of my religion.

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It held my interest from beginning to the wonderful end. Brovo keep up the good work you are a superb writer thank you.

I enjoyed this greatly. Much appreciated.

I LOVE this story. It is amazing, easily one of the best ones I’ve read on this website. Wow. It had everything I wanted to read and more. Excellent writing, good set up and everything. My hat off to you and I am eager to read more of your work this very instant.

I typically never read erotica. Stumbled on this when I was doing some research on Succubi. This held me from beginning to end. Amazing. Brilliant story and the sex scenes were art

Thoroughly enjoyed. Very well written with a great story line. Looking forward to reading more of yours now. 5 stars.

Hey Snekguy dude. I was laying in bed reading this story this morning, and it snapped me out of wasting the day and not working on my own job search and personal productivity. Not exactly the typical reaction to a sexy story, but it's a good thing. Thank you.

Well, I don’t normally post messages, but in this case I was awed by your tale...emotional, delightful, loving and erotic. Just perfect. Thank you Snekguy

The old guidelines for submissions to Penthouse Letters included the following (paraphrased) suggestion:

"Don't use scientific or Latin words. Don't say 'pudenda' when you should be saying 'cunt'. Don't say 'emission' when you should be saying 'cum'."

Personally I find vulgarity off-putting in my smut. You won't find any instances of words like cum, cunt, pussy, snatch, jizz, etc, in any of my stories. You will find words like manhood, emission, loins, ejaculate.

That's not me being pretentious, I just dislike the impact that curse words have when something intimate is being described. "Fuck my cunt" just takes me right out of it.

Hi, I was just looking for any stories that you have written. Can't seem to find any. Hmm...

"My sisters are seething with jealousy. The scent of a man is on the air, and yet they cannot have him. They cannot sate their lust, they must suppress their nature. Azazel has hidden this clearing from outsiders tonight, and so they cannot lure a mate of their own." She giggled salaciously, nipping his ear in her teeth as she whispered to him. "I had considered sharing you with them, would you have enjoyed that? I have endured the same drought that they have, I sympathize with their plight, they are my siblings after all. But now that I am bound to you, you are mine alone to enjoy."

I gotta say I was really sad when the MC didn't get to have sex with all the Seirim at the party:(

But other than that I loved this story it was absolutely amazing!

I just wanted to thank you for writing this elegant and depthful story. You deserve all the praise that comes your way.

I have to say, your descriptions are great. I liked how you are simple with stating the individual segments, allowing the imagination to piece things together while at the same time i dont sense any contrived sayings or over tread manners of speak. It feels like you are honest with your work and how you try to convey information and it makes for a very genuine heartfelt experience.

Just finished reading this and I found out there's a part 2!!! I am SO EXCITED to get to enjoy more of your writing!

A very creative and imaginative story, looking forward to reading the second chapter. I do have to say that the story started out kind of slow but it did get better as it went along. The almost two pages of detail for a BJ kind of reminded me of a guy I used to work with. If you asked him for the time, he would tell you how to build a watch. The last part was the best where Becky met ' Natasha' and had the crap scared out of her. Lord, I haven't thought about Pop Rocks in years. Used to enjoy then whenever I could find some for the kids and me. Thanks.