All Comments on 'Going All The Way'

by exxxwriter

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Unholy1Unholy1about 20 years ago
What a waste

There I was, jerking off to what could have been a good story, and then just as I get to the good stuff and about to cum, you end it. I'm sorry but this could have been so much better, you just got lazy.

DictatorWangDictatorWangabout 20 years ago
no.....

why you stop the story...ahhh...nice way to give somebody blue balls

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Going All The Way......NOT!

WHY EVEN BOTHER? YOU WROTE A GREAT STORY, BUT YOU MADE IT SO SHORT I CAN'T GET INTO IT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
very well written

Very well written, you have a nice writing style. I thought the ending & beginning were especially nice, classy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Intrest

You have got all our intrest. Well written. Please finish...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
fucking hot

write the next part to this this was fucking awsome dude

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