by exxxwriter
There I was, jerking off to what could have been a good story, and then just as I get to the good stuff and about to cum, you end it. I'm sorry but this could have been so much better, you just got lazy.
why you stop the story...ahhh...nice way to give somebody blue balls
WHY EVEN BOTHER? YOU WROTE A GREAT STORY, BUT YOU MADE IT SO SHORT I CAN'T GET INTO IT!
Very well written, you have a nice writing style. I thought the ending & beginning were especially nice, classy.