All Comments on 'Going Bald'

Hopefully this doesn't come across as harsh because it is not meant to be. I really liked your idea with the story but I really just couldn't get past the "LOL's" that you added in. There is a difference between a good story and a text message. A good story should be written the way that you would perceive it and most people don't actually think in text acronyms. Again, I apologize in advance for my straightforwardness.