All Comments on 'Going Goth Ch. 04'

by TE999

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Waiting

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Lets see it. This is great. Keep em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
you really need to proof read

you change the names of the characters all the time......Nic became Keri and Veronica became Virginia

dst275dst275about 10 years ago
Renaming Again

Another fine chapter but you changed Veronica's name to Virginia at the bottom of Page 1. Again, you need to be a bit more descriptive of your characters. Looking forward to the next few chapters.

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Love It šŸ˜˜

I'm just devouring every word like German chocolate cake. YUMMY YUM YUM.

Bridget69Bridget69over 4 years ago
Here we go again!

Another name change from Veronica to Virginia. Otherwise, I liked her involvement with the other girl whose name was finally sorted out and the moms getting caught by the husband.

MarsPatrolMarsPatrolover 1 year ago

Iā€™m loving it!

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