All Comments on 'Going Home'

your not leaving it there are you?

It definitely feels unfinished.

Continue the story!!!!

This is a well-done story that has the desired effect - it leaves the reader anxious for more! This author is quite talented.

Certainly deserving of another chapter.

...please, more!

Thanks for the feedback. More will follow in due time. I do have a day job.

Well written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

It's an honor to welcome a truly gifted writer to this site. Many of us much prefer to read a realistic story, to become invested in it and it's characters, rather than a narration much like a quickly thrown together script for a low budget porn movie. Thank you very much. I look forward to more. Five and Faved.

zips in Europe in 1946? Seems unlikely

Well written, but chock-full of historical anachronisms. Your writing would improve if you wrote about an era you knew better.

I hope it was...

I'm really pleased to imagine it was!

Please keep it developing!

"It's not the destination, it's the journey."

Yep. Next chapter, please!

I have the idea that Jonas meeting Gwen, both in France and in Los Angeles, was not a coincidence.

talking about exhibitionism/voyeurism in 1946? why didn't you give them cell phones as well?

WOW! Great story and then some - very different from the other stories I read on this site.

Excellent and then some - congratulations

FYI: Reading order is wrong, see author's biography for correct order.

At this point in time, this is what's listed there:

Going Home

Going Home - A Foundation

Going Home - Legacies

Going Home - Thanksgiving

Going Home - Semester End

Going Home - East for the Holidays

Going Home - The Proposal

Going Home - Preparations

Going Home - Wedded Bliss

Going Home - Disposable Income

Going Home - Life Gets Complicated

Going Home - Stressful Times

Going Home - Home Again? (submitted for publication 12/23/19)

Going Home - New Work (submitted for publication 06/01/2020