All Comments on 'Going Mechanical'

Very descriptive writing, transported me to being fucked on that gorgeous machine, what a dream that would be. Thanks, wishing my man could make one of those!

This is a great story, I only wish you had spent as much time on the finish as the build up. More details of the machine doing it's job on the woman, more details of how it was working her pussy, you started with good examples and then dropped them. Perhaps a revision is worth considering. I know I would read it!