by VWSinger
Please continue to write. I love bdsm stories that are powerful without being abusive. Lovely job
When i first started i thought, this is in the wrong place, non con or fetish may be the better option, I'm still not sure it's BDSM but I'm very glad i read it.
Knife play is and always has been a hard limit for me, yet the way you wrote encouraged me to read more and on finishing the story i was left wishing it was longer. Well done and thank you for broadening my horizons.
I started reading this more out of curiousity, knowing I wouldn't finish, just wanting to see how horrific it was. Imagine my suprise that I not only finished it, but enjoyed the writing. You did a good job with a hard (no pun intended) subject and while it did nothing for me on the sex side, I'm sure it will appeal to some. Well done story.
Thanks for the kind messages. The story was written in response to a challenge/request by some friends in a BDSM forum, and it seemed a waste not to share it.
I'm pretty busy writing erotica and SF fiction for publication, so I don't have a lot of spare time to write new short stories, but I do have a collection of stories that I wrote in the past and I will post them here since there appears to be interest in my sort of stories and I'm happy to share when I can.
Thanks again.
I wasn't certain what to expect at the start and then read on with a "flight"stance. I'm with bears lady, it doesn't do much for me personally as erotic fuel but i love the courage, respect and consent demonstrated. Extremely well written.